Essence

Written for:  Carpe Diem Writing and Enjoying Haiku #4 – having fun?

tears fall
on an empty sheet of paper
a new day rises

kissing
tongues melt together
as one

© Chèvrefeuille (our host)

Well …. that was my interpretation of “writing and enjoying haiku”, what is your interpretation? Do you have fun while creating haiku? That’s the goal for this “weekend-meditation” … step back and look at your haiku (or tanka) what do you see? Change your look and look at it like you were the reader and not the poet. What do you see … what scenes are coming in mind?

Here is my attempt:

Long cooking sauce
liquid evaporates 
essence is rich

http://chevrefeuillescarpediem.blogspot.nl/

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are in the process of returning to New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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