“twilight”

Written for:  Carpe Diem #1220 Twilight

Here is the haiku by Jane Reichhold to inspire you:

twilight
some of the light underwater
in a white stone

© Jane Reichhold (1937-2016)

in the twilight
silence deepens into mystery
last beam of light

© Chèvrefeuille (our host)

Here is my attempt:

in the twilight
her face glowing, bathing
indigo moon

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are in the process of returning to New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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4 Responses to “twilight”

  1. Excellent haiku Sara. I like how you have used the “free-style” way of Santoka Taneda.

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  2. Cressida says:

    Lovely haiku !

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