Depression

Written for:  Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #18, Depression
Depression? In this prompt I mean the “mood”, because in tanka “mood” plays a big role. 

depression

garbage
the rotting remains of life
take my breath away
a broken heart and more, but …
the sun started to shine again

© Chèvrefeuille (our host)

Here is my attempt:

She turns no lights on
in black and blue, plays blues tunes
eyes closed, no difference
wonders if a ray will peek through
how long will it take this time?

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are in the process of returning to New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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One Response to Depression

  1. ihatepoetry says:

    Exactly – thanks.

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