Coolness

Written for:  Carpe Diem #1055, Coolness

a day shortens
as the beach cools
its shadows

dry creek bed
a coolness flows down
evening

wind chimes
the silence absorbs
any cool breeze

© Jane Reichhold

Here is my attempt:

first cool evening
after warm summer day
begins earlier

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are in the process of returning to New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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