Blue Sax

Written for:  Imaginary Gardens With Real Toads
Get Listed, Equinox Edition, featuring Leonard Cohen

leonard cohen graphic

This month’s word list:

gravity
friend
able
serious
hungry
touch
work
aspect
nourish(ment)
… or any others you choose from the quote.

As a reminder: select 3 or more of these words (or reasonable variants).

Sensuous notes fill
the room. Serious saxophone
sounds nourish hungry souls.
Touches of blue lift them
from gravity’s pull. Able
to escape the realm of work,
friends beam at each other.
In this aspect, music is all
encompassing.

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About purplepeninportland

I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York. I live with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. We spent eight lovely years in Portland, OR, but are in the process of returning to New York. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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13 Responses to Blue Sax

  1. Kerry O'Connor says:

    A very musical piece. I like the alliterative touches and word choice is perfect too.

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  2. Beautiful example…so true, music can be so nourishing.

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  3. ihatepoetry says:

    Yes, it is – music is one of the universal languages. Beautifully captured.

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  4. How nice! Music certainly soothes the soul. Wonderful lines Sara!

    Hank

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  5. I love music that way too…

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  6. Shawna says:

    “In this aspect, music is all
    encompassing.”

    I LOVE the ending. Especially how you squeezed out “in-compassing.” Brilliant. Music is definitely my in-compass too.

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  7. Oh, yes, it is! As is your work!

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  8. M says:

    Sara, thanks for taking the suggestion and filling the lines with a flourish – like all music, your poem enlivens and uplifts.

    thanks for adding your voice ~

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  9. Oh yes, music can defy gravity.. Love this!

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