Field of Wildflowers

a basket of grass,

and no one there, -

mountains of spring

(Shiki)

 

field of wildflowers

birds and bees free to observe

sole sounds in meadow

 (Sara)

 

Written for Carpe Diem Haiku Kai/Revise haiku #4/Shiki

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I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, New York, though I now embrace the Pacific Northwest as home, residing with my husband, John, and two charming rescue dogs–Marion Miller and Murphy. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy reading poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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5 Responses to Field of Wildflowers

  1. Mike Bayles says:

    I like this.

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  2. You did a great revision of this haiku by Shiki Sara.

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