Mirage

Posted on February 17, 2013 by

Mirage

 

Wind of History by Jacek Yerka

Wind of History by Jacek Yerka

Caught in winding trap

of ancient

memories

that lure you back to a time

now, non-existent.

 

Written for:  http://magpietales.blogspot.com

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I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, NY. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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22 Responses to Mirage

  1. deanabo says:
    February 17, 2013 at 10:31 pm

    These are the perfect words for this image. Brilliant.

  2. Shers Gallagher says:
    February 17, 2013 at 10:39 pm

    They may not exist but linger, all the same, in that old house. ;-)

  3. yvonne osborne says:
    February 17, 2013 at 11:26 pm

    This is rather what I also took from this…memories of dreams, dreams of memories.

  4. L says:
    February 17, 2013 at 11:45 pm

    succint and fitting.

  5. Susan says:
    February 18, 2013 at 2:42 am

    I think you’re on to something with a trap and heading toward some false destination or memory … I’d love to see you work more on these words and images …

  6. SueAnn says:
    February 18, 2013 at 11:07 am

    Nicely done!
    Hugs
    SUeAnn

  7. kay says:
    February 18, 2013 at 12:01 pm

    perfect for the image..x

  8. Berowne says:
    February 18, 2013 at 12:23 pm

    “Ethereal” is the word I’d use – well done

  9. Rigel Ordinario says:
    February 18, 2013 at 5:38 pm

    I agree with Berowne. I would use “ethereal” to describe this. Great choice of words. I like the concise structure. :)

  10. Helen Dehner says:
    February 18, 2013 at 5:53 pm

    You created a mini-novel with this one!!

  11. Sue Anderson says:
    February 18, 2013 at 8:16 pm

    “winding trap”

    nice word selection there

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