He was committed
to having his wife committed.
She was committed
to an unusual committee
that had husbands committed.
Each thought their commitment
was stronger, yet both ended
up as commit-ees.
Written for: http://poetryblogroll.blogspot.com/verse first/committed
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Wow … what a commitment !!!
can relate to this…in some ways…good one
Thanks, Sharon!
I enjoyed the word play with commitment…ha..ha…Those committees sometimes end up with less than satisfactory results ~
And yet, we keep forming them.
Oh, no… sounds like a sick commitment.
Any way you look at it!
Very clever! I loved the word play and the sense of light-heartedness!
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Oh so clever, well done!!
Thanks, Av!
that one big commitment
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Fun word play here!
Thanks, PL!
LOL! Hilarious word play… and perhaps true to a few!
Thanks, Kim!
Oh, man, when I read this, Sara, I thought about all the ways I have been committed… too many! This was full of fun, and thank God it was not autobiographical, right? Great stuff, my dear, just my sort of dark humor. Peace, Amy
http://sharplittlepencil.com/2013/02/14/all-at-once/
Thanks, Amy!
were they committed together? =)
ooh! Talk about the dark side!
Scary how true this can be for some. I like the play on words, Sarah.
Thanks, Hannah!