BRUCE

I ripped open the envelope,
stared and shrieked.  Four
tickets for Springsteen
in concert.  First thing
I ever won.  Colored lights
streaked across stage.
Power pulsated from
microphone.  Sweat poured
down his face.  Veins bulged
like blue snakes in his neck
and forehead.  Vocalizing,
his written words cried while
guitar hummed.  There I was,
alone on a new planet,
swallowing man and music;
nothing else existed.

 

Written for: http://margoroby.wordpress.com/
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I am a freelance poet, born and bred in Brooklyn, NY. My goal is to create and share poetry with others who write, or simply enjoy poetry. I hope to touch a nerve in you, and feel your sparks as well.
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12 Responses to BRUCE

  1. Green Speck says:

    “Swallowing man and music” – you have a way with words :-)

  2. ghostom says:

    Ha, go with thw flow and have fun!

  3. margo roby says:

    ‘alone on a new planet’ — I love that to describe the feeling

  4. Myrna Zach says:

    You go girl!

  5. cloudfactor5 says:

    Sounds like a great time to me !!

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